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What if and Insurance agent found out that his biggest multi-million dollar client was killing its customers to collect their insurance policy death benefits and the FBI asked him to work under cover to expose them.
ACT 1
1.)Blaque Is in the park having lunch and is approached by a very attractive FBI agent named Pauline James. After flirting with him and identifying herself she asks him about his biggest client. Blaque very surprised and untrusting of course . Agrees to listen to what she has to say reluctlant though.
2.)Blaque then has a meeting with his biggest client Mrs. Caring the recent widow of Mr. Caring about the millions of dollars in trust fund payments they have been receiving as beneficiaries of life insurance policies. Mrs. Caring plays as if she is unaware of her husbands business dealings and stops the meeting and acts as if she is late for another appointment and rushes out. Blaque is confused by her abrubt exit because she scheduled the meeting right after he husband died.
3.)Blaque and is secretary start looking over the claims and files of the Caring’s foundation and realizes that most of deceased people die right before there 75th birthday ,which is peculiar because after age 75 the policies mature and the policy owner is given the cash value. Blaque calls agent James and informs her of his findings. She then asks him to dinner on the phone. He reluctantly agrees, but deep down he thinks about how he was hurt in his recent divorce. She says she wants to discuss things in more detail in person not on the phone.
4.)That evening Blaques is leaving his office and as he is going down the elevator his phone rings with an unknown number , he answers and says I cant hear you I’m in the elevator and then hangs up, as he walks out the elevator and into the parking garage he drops his phone. Disgusted he bends over hoping his screen is not broke. Suddenly from around the corner comes a black hurst ,with the tires squealing is headed straight for him , he dives out and the way falling down between two cars. He remains on the ground as the hurst stops . He slowly gets up , and peeks from around the pole at the hurst. Silence he yells at the hurst. Suddenly the back window goes down and then someone inside starts shooting at him. All he can see is the muzzle flash. He dives back down and the hurst then speeds of . Puzzled he rises and walks to his car. And calls the police. Puzzled he wonders why they are shooting at him .
5.)the police arrive to take a report but don’t believe him because there are no bullet whole anywhere . He then gets a call from another number unknow number , he answers. The voice on the phone says, stop looking at the Caring’s Foundations files, I wont miss next time. The phone hangs up
CENTRAL DRAMATIC QUESTION OF YOUR SCRIPT
Will Blaque Find the information out about the Caring foundation and will he find put who tried to kill him ,
ACT 2
6.)Blaque is in second meeting with Mrs. Caring.at this meeting she has brought her twin sons Crane and Wayne Caring. At which time thewy get into a heated argument in the conference room Ms caring calls his boss Mr. Hitchstien and demands that Blaque just go with the way things have been going.
7.) Blaque is in Mr. Hitchstien office and is told by his boss to just process the death benefits and not to ask any questions
8.)Blaque and Agent James are at dinner and he informs her of all the meetings and that he can’t find any more of the files on the Caring foundation because they have been moved. Agent Jenkins is not surprised and also Blaque tells he about his boss Mr. Hitchstien. She is surprised by that. Agent James rubs his and tells him we will get them in a flirting way .
9.)Blaque gets home and his house has been broken into his home office is in shambles , he is upset and also confused about the break in .
Then he remembers that he told his boss he had some of the older files at home.
10.)The next day he makes an unscheduled visit to the caring foundation and calls agent James and tells he what he is about to do . She says no but Blaque hangs up
11.)Agent james grabs her coat and heads out the door and instructs to other agents to come with he
12.)Blaques is in the Carinf foundations office when the secretary says some one will be with you shortly
13.)Crane and Wayne are in the back room where tha caskets are and ptting pistols in their waist bands.
14.) The secretary gets up and walks out the office and goes to lunch , the caring brothers approach Blaque, they tell him to come with them to there office
15.)When blaque gets to there office way turns around and hits him in the head knocking him out.
CENTRAL DRAMATIC QUESTION #2
Will Blaques get the files he needs and expose the carings and will he start to trust Agent caring
ACT 3
16.) Blaque wakes up and finds himself inside a casket that is locked , its totally dark and he has no light but that from his cell phone which has no signal. He notices that inside the casket with him are papers they look like the old caring files he is looking for.
17.)Agent James arrives at the at the caring foundation.
18.) Crane and Wayne are loading the casket where blaque is inside a box truck that says City Cremation.
19.)Agent James comes around the building at the same time with here FBI jacket on .
20.) Crane pulls his gun and tells her to put up her hands . He disarms her the other agents come around the other corner and a shoot out insues. Agent james attemts to run and wayne shoots her in the shoulder wounded she plays dead . As the agents are shooting at the caring brothers a bullet hits the caskets lock and Blaques is able to push the lid open. Hearing and seeing All the shooting he slowly gets out and jumps on ways back and wrestles him to the ground knocking him out in the process . Crane is wounded by the agents handcuff him
21.) Black rushes over to Agents James side worried she is dead , but she was just unconscious , he tells he about all the files in the casket .She tell him to look at the side of the truck , Blaque shacks his head , And he smiles and really gains a since of appreciation for Agent james because she saved his life. He feels he can trust he because he didn’t ask he to come there.
22.) Agent james are at dinner and she informs him of the kick backs his boss was getting and slo that they caught Mrs. Caring at a air port in Jamacia and was waiting to extradite her to face charges
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